Pasir Ris Secondary School
390 Tampines Street 21
Singapore 529400
3 July 2008
Mr Mah Bow Tan
Minister for National Development
Member of Tampines GRC
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Dear Mr Mah
Feedback on playground in tampines
I am a student from sec 2 express .I am writing a letter to you to give you several feedback on the playgrounds in tampines. After observing the playgrounds in tampines I realize that there are some good points and bad points about the playgrounds in tampines. Well I think that the overall appearance and facilities is quite okay, but I think that there is still room for improvement. But we have this project which made us think that we can make a playground a better place for the disabilities and normal children
Our group had purposely choose bright colour such as red and light blue instead of dull colour such as black. We thought of this solution because we think that this can make the terminal illness kid to think of the positive side .The playground design by my group is quite special from the rest of the playground in tampines. Actually part of our ideas are extracted from the book bridge to terabithia and part of it is our group ideas.
Since the terminal illness is going to pass away soon so I think that special playground should be specially design to let those kid enjoy their remaining day.
The playground can be design to make it bigger and on the other hand more interesting.
Thank you for your attention.
Your faithfully,
Jun yu
Making a Playground
-The Writer-